Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
©2008-2009 =Ultra-Violet-X
:iconultra-violet-x:

Artist's Comments

A butterfly on a buddleia which came out looking like ice.
I like the effect of this photo. :)

Critiques


:iconstratege:
Well i think you get the colors of the butterfly very well. Your focus is not exactly on the eyes but it still works.

The angle in this version is interessting - and the space on the right is perfect. Look like it will start in the next few sec. ;)

The background is not the best - the bright areas are too much they take the attention from the butterfly and make the pic turbulent (sorry for my bad english :blushes: )
And the Flower is outshined (too bright) but i know - a white flower ... in the sunlight ... is very hard to take ;) Maybe you should here work with some umbrella or your body to spent shadow.

Well good work - but you can work a little bit on your technique ;)
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconemmejay-fwz:
Pweety ! the focusing is just awesome. Blur blur sharp sharp :boogie:

a little like bokeh?

--
#YourValley needs you!

:damphyr::heart: contiguous L O VE
:iconultra-violet-x:
bokeh? :confused:

And thanks :hug:

--
:winner: Enter my Wildlife Contest to win BIG on subscriptions and prints! :winner:

.::Portfolio::.
:iconemmejay-fwz:
*iBokeh nod nod

--
#YourValley needs you!

:damphyr::heart: contiguous L O VE

Details

September 1, 2008
3.3 MB
52.2 KB
800×536

Statistics

3
13 [who?]
702 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Camera Data

NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
10/6400 second
F/5.6
105 mm
400
Sep 1, 2008, 9:32:11 AM

Site Map